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Laroux - I sort of enjoyed writing it too....

posted by Ca88andra on October 28, 2004 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88 ~ I just loved this

posted by Laroux on October 28, 2004 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Angie - I don't need much of an excuse to shop for new outfits *wink*

posted by Ca88andra on October 3, 2004 at 5:00 AM | link to this | reply

Definately heartbreaking

when one of your favorite outfits can no longer be worn. Good reason to shop, yes? Loved the poem Ca88andra!

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on October 2, 2004 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

buxom - what a wonderful comment! thank you...

posted by Ca88andra on September 20, 2004 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

Truly beautiful ... you express the heart of this poem with such a unique

voice :).

posted by Moohahaha on September 19, 2004 at 10:28 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you marzieh...

posted by Ca88andra on September 19, 2004 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply

dignified, poignant and true - I loved its sensuality

posted by marzieh on September 19, 2004 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Good advice aardvark!

posted by Ca88andra on September 15, 2004 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

Hang on to it for as long as you want to, then let it go without any remorse.

posted by aardvark on September 15, 2004 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you ltlmac!

posted by Ca88andra on September 14, 2004 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

very provocative poem...

This is a wonderful piece.  Nice job!

Write On!  ltlmac70 wuz here...

posted by superflymom119 on September 14, 2004 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

lol!!!

posted by Ca88andra on September 13, 2004 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

me too.

posted by Temple on September 13, 2004 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

PJ - soul smiles sound wonderful...

posted by Ca88andra on September 11, 2004 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88-- I know you have been bleached by the Son of Ages! It is comforting

Lovely poem, especially the illustrative spacing on the screen. No need to screen that smile of the ages...Yes, it will outlast the body. Why? 'Heard of soul smiles?

posted by Budd-Himoschris on September 10, 2004 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reading unicorn...

posted by Ca88andra on September 9, 2004 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

wow

very cool poem! Thanks for sharing that one.
PastorB

posted by PastorB on September 9, 2004 at 4:25 PM | link to this | reply

In that case Tapsel, I am forever young!

posted by Ca88andra on September 9, 2004 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

Yes you will. Yes you will. You keep it on. Your are only as

old as you see yourself.

posted by TAPS. on September 9, 2004 at 4:08 PM | link to this | reply

Wildwoman - that means a lot to me - thanks!

posted by Ca88andra on September 9, 2004 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

littlems - thank you!

posted by Ca88andra on September 9, 2004 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

MariVye, you made me feel all warm and tingly with your comments - thank you!

posted by Ca88andra on September 9, 2004 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Good stuff Ca88andra!  I read this whole page and I reiterate, good stuff!

posted by Wildwoman_Laloba on September 9, 2004 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

what a beautiful poem Ca88...

posted by littlemspickles on September 9, 2004 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

achingly beautiful... wonderfully written.  I love the way you likened your youth to clothing.  It brings the poem to life. I don't have the right words to describe how terrific this poem is - keep up the good work girlfriend ~

posted by MariVye on September 9, 2004 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Kelli - nice to know someone can relate!

posted by Ca88andra on September 8, 2004 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

ca88andra

Very nice!  I DO know the feeling all too well!  I loved it

posted by Kelli on September 8, 2004 at 4:41 AM | link to this | reply

awww, geee *blush* thanks....

posted by Ca88andra on September 8, 2004 at 3:52 AM | link to this | reply

did i say your poems were fine??

liar -- this one is beautiful! tg

posted by tbgroucho on September 8, 2004 at 3:43 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Symphony - it was one of those poems that just come to you, out of the blue!

posted by Ca88andra on September 5, 2004 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

thats beautiful and sad

beautifully written

posted by _Symphony_ on September 5, 2004 at 5:58 AM | link to this | reply