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Tremac
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September 5, 2004
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tremacc
I know a thing or two about that ongoing theme! Take care.
posted by
Holy_Grail
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September 5, 2004
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HolyG, only conflicting emotions in matters of the heart-- the deepest sea.
An ongoing theme, that sometimes makes it's way into my haiku.
Thank you for your concern and for reading me. Hope all is well with you.
posted by
Tremac
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September 5, 2004
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tremacc
Sounds like tumultuous times? Hope not, but still a great haiku!
posted by
Holy_Grail
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September 5, 2004
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Hello Symphony. Yes, sweetie I know that you can relate.
You have some seriously deep things to consider and ponder on. I am okay, thank you. I hope you are well.
posted by
Tremac
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September 5, 2004
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yes that sounds like my life right now................
hope you are ok?........have a nice day.............take care
posted by
_Symphony_
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September 5, 2004
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Hello, Jemmie. Thanks. It's always me, though.
Whatever human strength or frailty I am feeling in that moment is what's cast forth, but I hear you--- I get you. I have written one in the past using the words "ebb" and "flow". Maybe it's time for me to reflect on those words again....
posted by
Tremac
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September 4, 2004
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Inventive? Thanks Sass. Nice of you to drop by.
posted by
Tremac
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September 4, 2004
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Now this is the tremacc I remember!
I love the use of waves and the up and down motion.
Perhaps you can use an ebb and flow of water in a future haiku!
posted by
Jemmie211
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September 4, 2004
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Inventive
I like the line about the waves of confliction.
posted by
sassyass_64
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September 4, 2004
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DAVID, COOL! THANKS FOR APPRECIATING THAT...
posted by
Tremac
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September 4, 2004
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Thank you, Rach.
posted by
Tremac
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September 4, 2004
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10:43 AM
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Very good Tremacc!
And using the letters in that format (formation?) is really smart ! 
posted by
David1Spirit
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September 4, 2004
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Beautiful!
posted by
RachelAnna
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September 4, 2004
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LOL. Ah Scribey, ladies man! That is definitely peetry to me!
To be continued...
posted by
Tremac
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September 4, 2004
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Thanks Tanoo, I feel really blessed to have stumbled onto Blogit.
Not only am I finding my voice, but also--- amazing people like you as well! Thanks!
posted by
Tremac
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September 4, 2004
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rising and falling, with you...oh yeah. love scriber
posted by
scriber
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September 4, 2004
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Waves of confliction... wow Tremaac, thats awesome!
I do love your Haikus and cant pick a favourite, theyre all amazing!
posted by
Tanoolicious
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September 4, 2004
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