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Angelz - I heard about that - dreadful tragedy. I actually wrote the poem after some pretty bad storms here in Melbourne, but it can hold true for a lot of situations.

posted by Ca88andra on October 25, 2004 at 1:26 AM | link to this | reply

HI~~~~

You know the instant i read this poem it reminded me of the terrible deaths that occured on the mountains while they were climbing, the got caught in a winter storm in cali... they were Japanese. I just felt I had to let you know .. what It reminded me of....  Good night.Umbrella never crossed my mind... hmm??

posted by ANGELZ_MIND on October 24, 2004 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

true enough ca88andra

hope you've had a good day! tg

posted by tbgroucho on September 4, 2004 at 5:00 AM | link to this | reply

tb - your umbrella would have turned inside out in the wind!!!

posted by Ca88andra on September 4, 2004 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

good one

i needed my umbrella! tg

posted by tbgroucho on September 3, 2004 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Melodystar!!!

posted by Ca88andra on September 3, 2004 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

This is great!

posted by Melodystar on September 3, 2004 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Tapsel - it must be difficult for you.

posted by Ca88andra on September 1, 2004 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

Ca - one never knows where it will hit. At least they are not right on the

coast.  They are about a 20 minute drive from the coast and they seem to think that is far enough.  But, I don't.

posted by TAPS. on September 1, 2004 at 3:56 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Tapsel, thats not good at all. Hope no damage is done.

posted by Ca88andra on September 1, 2004 at 3:50 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra - I'm afraid its going to do it again and

my kids still don't have the tree off of their house from the last one.

posted by TAPS. on September 1, 2004 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for commenting billy. I'm glad you picked that up, I found it interesting to visualise.

posted by Ca88andra on August 31, 2004 at 3:45 PM | link to this | reply

cas88andra - the first two stanzas put bas weather around

the mouth which is an interesting way of looking at it

posted by FreeManWalking on August 31, 2004 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

PJ - no it wasn't about Florida, although I suppose it could have been. I drew on memories of various storms I've seen. Thanks for commenting!

posted by Ca88andra on August 31, 2004 at 3:47 AM | link to this | reply

Great use of simple, everyday words in powerful new ways, Ca88.

Was this about the hurricane in Florida? I couldn't help thinking of nature's other face there, and the losses....

posted by Budd-Himoschris on August 31, 2004 at 3:44 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reading Wade - glad you liked it!

posted by Ca88andra on August 28, 2004 at 5:49 PM | link to this | reply

Awsome!

Wow verry descriptive! Lots of intesity!

posted by oubleU on August 28, 2004 at 5:45 PM | link to this | reply

thank you Symphony!

posted by Ca88andra on August 28, 2004 at 3:52 PM | link to this | reply

Tapsel - thanks, that was what I was hoping to do!!!

posted by Ca88andra on August 28, 2004 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

yes you paint a great picture with words

posted by _Symphony_ on August 28, 2004 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

You captured well the forces of nature. I felt like I was there.

posted by TAPS. on August 28, 2004 at 6:17 AM | link to this | reply