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That was really good! :)

posted by Tanoolicious on August 26, 2004 at 1:55 PM | link to this | reply

*gasp*
this is CHILLING - gave me goosebumps, well done :)

posted by poetkitty on August 25, 2004 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

Great Poem . So dark.

posted by Melodystar on August 25, 2004 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Yikes, woman!    -tp

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 24, 2004 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

wow. Very graphic.

posted by Gheeghee on August 23, 2004 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Dark and very graphic. It's a good thing I read this before lunch.

posted by Talion on August 23, 2004 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony,

I'm fine...just like to write dark stuff sometimes.

posted by MiaElla on August 23, 2004 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

hope you are ok
I love the picture.................

posted by _Symphony_ on August 23, 2004 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

Mia
Seems a trifle harsh, but just wanted to say Hi yawl

posted by WileyJohn on August 23, 2004 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply