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WHAMMIE, LOL.

I hear ya.   I walk around with my heart on my sleeve and it gets me into so much trouble!   Thanks for your wonderful  words (ha, I will try).

posted by Tremac on August 22, 2004 at 4:08 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc.....with your amazing words you could almost turn the

Man-Devouring Whamenator into a Romantic........I really wish you would stop it already!!!!!

Luv,

Whammie

posted by WHAMENATOR on August 22, 2004 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks HolyG. That was the best compliment.

I feel like you totally got me!  I was writing this to myself and everyone that I come into contact with.

posted by Tremac on August 22, 2004 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

That was lovely and gave me the warm fuzzies!

posted by Holy_Grail on August 21, 2004 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Billy for this haiku. You are always so innovative.

What a wonderful way to describe the sun!

posted by Tremac on August 21, 2004 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

a haiku for tremacc

suns burn on rooftops

happy fires above our

heads with no danger

posted by FreeManWalking on August 21, 2004 at 8:53 AM | link to this | reply

Tremacc, I'll try not to. Thanks!

posted by Ariala on August 21, 2004 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Ariala. You too girl, don't give up that poetry!

posted by Tremac on August 21, 2004 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Nice job.

posted by Ariala on August 21, 2004 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Symphony! How are you, girl? I hope all is well with you.

Enjoy your day.

posted by Tremac on August 21, 2004 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful

loved it well done.,,,,,,take care

posted by _Symphony_ on August 21, 2004 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply