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A lovely poem, lovely one...

Nice reading you,

iSiSeyeS

posted by myrrhage_ on August 25, 2004 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Well, well.... Very inspiring and deep.. Thank u for reading me. I like your poetry.

posted by Devious07 on August 20, 2004 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

Very lovely
and romantic.  Take care

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on August 19, 2004 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

Scriber, Thank you for stopping by. Your comments are appreciated.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Melodystar--He should certainly rise to the occasion reading this. love
scriber

posted by scriber on August 18, 2004 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

Beachbelle, Thank you .

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

This is very lovely
I know what you are speaking of.

posted by beachbelle on August 18, 2004 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Wileycoyote Your are so sweet. Thank you.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

Melodystar
That has a nice melody and you are a star kiddo. Wowie, gotta go nap after that one luv.

posted by WileyJohn on August 18, 2004 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

HarveyG , your are so sweet, Thank you for reading.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Hello, stay where you belong, and keep you happy....

posted by Star5_ on August 18, 2004 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Wildwomen, I was feeling a bit romantic, Thank you.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Melody
mmmmmmmmmm, nice.

posted by Wildwoman_Laloba on August 18, 2004 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

Katray, It just came from my heart. Thank you.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Gheghee, Thanks for stopping by.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply

"I need you I whisper, waiting/In the dark for you" evokes many images in my mind...great poem

posted by Gheeghee on August 18, 2004 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Kwilliams, I am gald you like it. Thanks for stopping by.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

Scriber, Thank you for the compliment.

posted by Melodystar on August 18, 2004 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! I think I need a fan to cool me down.

Excellent poem.

posted by Chaltuu on August 18, 2004 at 6:11 AM | link to this | reply

Very heartfelt and strong Melody
Beautiful.

posted by Katray2 on August 18, 2004 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

melody, what the last 2 guys said;)  LOVELY poem  

posted by EccentricShock on August 17, 2004 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Melodystar
Lovely and sensuous!

posted by HarveyG on August 17, 2004 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Melodystar--i see your love reaching out in poetic verse. well done. love
Scriber

posted by scriber on August 17, 2004 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely
So beautifully spare--like a Japenese print.  And thanks for reading my blog about me and my mom in the Southwest.  That trip was filled with so many strange and mystical moments, I have to write about it.  Thanks, Mellie.

posted by xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx on August 17, 2004 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

Word.Smith, Thank you.

posted by Melodystar on August 17, 2004 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply

Melody, I like!

posted by word.smith on August 17, 2004 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

Odysseus, Thank you for stopping by.

posted by Melodystar on August 17, 2004 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

This is
very moving!

posted by telemachus on August 17, 2004 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

Sky5 Thank you. It came from my heart. It scares me sometimes to write those things.

posted by Melodystar on August 16, 2004 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

good work melody

posted by Star5_ on August 16, 2004 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply

Gina, when you think about the person who changes your life , you want to be in thier arms. Thanks again for stopping by.

posted by Melodystar on August 16, 2004 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

very nice poem, melody!!!
i love the "in your arms" theme. You write beautifully! Love, Gina

posted by Gheeghee on August 16, 2004 at 1:50 PM | link to this | reply

Hugs N kisses,  I was thinking of him . Thank you.

posted by Melodystar on August 16, 2004 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

its beautiful :) xxxxxxx

posted by hugz_n_kisses on August 16, 2004 at 1:44 PM | link to this | reply

Symphony, Thank you so much.

posted by Melodystar on August 16, 2004 at 1:40 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful
I loved it!

posted by _Symphony_ on August 16, 2004 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply