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incredible...I am stunned.

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 16, 2004 at 12:36 AM | link to this | reply

Tx Scriber~
Love~ Vibrance

posted by Vibrance on August 15, 2004 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

Vib-very nice. -love Scriber

posted by scriber on August 15, 2004 at 5:35 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for your response.

posted by mariantonia on August 15, 2004 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

no I haven't written a sequel
or response from the man's point of view but I'll give it some thoughts. Love, Vib

posted by Vibrance on August 15, 2004 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant. Beautiful. Is there a sequel to this? From the perspective of the man? Is he upset by the broken past?

posted by mariantonia on August 15, 2004 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

Really Good

posted by GibwuProductions on August 14, 2004 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

Really Good

posted by GibwuProductions on August 14, 2004 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you for your kind words.
I made some edit to it since you read it...you're so fast...thank you for your support and kind word...I am hoping to publish my first recueil this coming Autumn.

posted by Vibrance on August 14, 2004 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Vibrance

That was beautiful.  I love the line about rising to her memory.  Beautiful

posted by ladyofshalott on August 14, 2004 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply