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great one
as usual. tg
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tbgroucho
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August 20, 2004
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wow, mia. VERY POWERFUL
Great emotion in so few words...this is a major piece for your collection~ Love, Gina
posted by
Gheeghee
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August 18, 2004
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Intense and deep, Dear Mia...glad it is not a current theme in your Life.
-tp
posted by
teddypoet_
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August 18, 2004
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oooooooo, my dear mia ella.......
posted by
9STAR
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August 16, 2004
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Eeek
mmmm yes, you captured a moment i remember too - perfect, you know how to be real and concise, cut it where it should be. perfectly crafted.
posted by
poetkitty
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August 15, 2004
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Powerful and sad.
posted by
katray4
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August 15, 2004
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Oh no...my mom is a great person...this is an older poem I wrote
-something that happened when I was a teenager - over a misunderstanding. You know those adolescent years when mothers and daughter's fight over really stupid stuff..it is one of my favorite poems though...debating whether or not I should put it in my new poetry book.
posted by
MiaElla
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August 14, 2004
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Melody
That is simply awful! My ex husband spit at me before he left and said see you in hell. But, coming from a mom! Did she raise you? I'd say she has serious problems, I know my ex does. xoxoxoxoo
posted by
EccentricShock
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August 14, 2004
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Wow. Deep. Just find solace in knowing
that we all have some shit to bury.
posted by
Tremac
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August 14, 2004
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That is harsh. I am sorry you feel that way.
posted by
Melodystar
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August 14, 2004
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Miaella
Wow. Very strong. *hugs*
posted by
Wildwoman_Laloba
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August 14, 2004
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you sure are angry
its great how you are unburdening your soul.......to let out your difficult pain..............I understand........look after yourself...............take care
posted by
_Symphony_
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August 14, 2004
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