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Hello, Mr. Angel. I can totally relate. More power to ya, baby.

Bring it on.   I will definitely read it.

posted by Tremac on August 12, 2004 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Only just got that!

This is getting addictive. Don't think I can stop...

posted by MarkAnthonyAngel on August 12, 2004 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for the haiku, Mark Anthony Angel.

Well said and well syllabled.

posted by Tremac on August 12, 2004 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmm

I quite like Haiku,
you have to be disciplined,
because they're so short.

posted by MarkAnthonyAngel on August 12, 2004 at 4:41 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, HolyG.

posted by Tremac on August 12, 2004 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

I know that feeling well.  Very lovely. 

posted by Holy_Grail on August 12, 2004 at 3:13 PM | link to this | reply

Whammie, thanks a lot. Your feedback is awesome and appreciated.

posted by Tremac on August 12, 2004 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

JEMMIE, Yes. I can tell from your posts that you can relate.

posted by Tremac on August 12, 2004 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Symphony. You are the best. Thanks. You were missed too.

 

posted by Tremac on August 12, 2004 at 12:05 PM | link to this | reply

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME WORDS!!!!

Whammie

posted by WHAMENATOR on August 12, 2004 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

Great one!

I often find that I have so very much love to give (both to friends and to my fiance).  I know how it is that love can overflow the heart and flow into another.

posted by Jemmie211 on August 12, 2004 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

excellent

I have so missed you and your hakiu        (spelling looks dodgy)

have a nice day................take care

posted by _Symphony_ on August 12, 2004 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply