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posted by
daisysface
on July 21, 2005 at 2:18 PM
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Interesting...
It does show some promise.
The only problem with reading accents is that they seem to get a bit irritating after a while. If acted, it would just be natural.
I like the lead-in... The reader is equally as curious as Charlie as to why this woman loves balls so much. Great foreshadowing.
posted by
phonetic_semen
on July 21, 2005 at 12:10 PM
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hooker...
ha ha ha...no man has hurt me recently.. though i was married to someone who did not breathe the same air i did for a short while..
this isn't my story actually.. i read in a collection of erotic short stories..i just think it has some promise in the independant film circuit.. though, the original story and this scripted version i wrote are quite a bit different (i've toned it down alot).. i liked the idea of the woman being a serial killer..and the guy being a typical guy and things aren't as he presents them. it was more about her, than him.. maybe i need to rework it so it comes out that way more...
posted by
daisysface
on August 23, 2004 at 10:43 PM
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I think a man has hurt you recently...I'm ashamed for my gender. Seriously, this is something I think has great promise. Pornography interspersed with creative plotting. The only obstacle is finding pornstars who can act. You'll have to produce it amateur style. I can act
posted by
hooker
on August 23, 2004 at 10:33 PM
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