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goodnight Tremacc, email me when you get a chance,

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 9:23 PM | link to this | reply

LOL. PLAY NICE YOU TWO.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply

hahaha, u both crack me up.........

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

thanks for the compliment about my name

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

YES PJ-- SKY IS A WONDERFUL PLACE FOR SEA GULLS.

 

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

YES, SUE--   SKY IS A WONDERFUL NAME FOR YOU.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

it's nice to see u both happy............

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

U did remember. You will make me call you sweetheart all over again.

Take care... I miss you. But sKY5 is around to cheer me up.

posted by Budd-Himoschris on August 9, 2004 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

people like my name, haaaa, that's not bad.

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

You were always able to talk the walk about miracles...understanding me,LOL

Your trademark is a brand name in Haiku Heaven. I have only my haiku haven in which I hide until totally understood. Thanks for being a friend to Blue Sky Over PunsterYPunday.

posted by Budd-Himoschris on August 9, 2004 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

PJ, I WAS RESPONDING TO SUE'S COMMENT BEFORE YOURS.

APPARENTLY, WE POSTED AT AROUND THE SAME TIME.   BELIEVE U ME.   I KNOW WHO U ARE.   THERE IS ONLY ONE PERSON ON BLOGIT WHO CALLS ME TREE!   SEQUOIA, I STILL REMEMBER.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

THANK YOU ORIGINAL INFLUENCE. MUCH APPRECIATED.

I LIKED THAT WORD TOO.   I THINK I BUILT THE WHOLE HAIKU AROUND IT, MAYBE.   THANKS FOR READING.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

here, sue is sky5,

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

PJ, Sue 9457, each number has importance and identity, so u can't change it

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

What are you talking about now? I know who I am talking to.

Sue is Sue and you are you!   Maybe there are sea gulls in the sky.   I will take a peek outside and let you know.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Nice....I like the word encrusted!

posted by Original_Influence on August 9, 2004 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

tremaccccc, what happened?

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

LOL, PJ. YOU ARE TALKING IN CIRCLES AGAIN BUT I HEAR YOU

AND TOTALLY APPRECIATE WHAT YOU ARE SAYING.    I HAVE BEEN PRETTY QUIET LATELY, DIDN'T THINK ANYONE WOULD NOTICE, HA.   BUT YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN VERY OBSERVANT.     GOT YOUR EMAIL.   THANKS.   YES, IT SEEMS YOU ARE FOLLOWING THE SKY NOW, LOL.    FLIPPING THE SCRIPT CAN BE A GOOD THING.   

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for calling me Sue! Just to prove u wrong, "Hi Sue9467! hugs"

Do u believe me now Treemacccc!

posted by Budd-Himoschris on August 9, 2004 at 8:54 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Sue, glad you enjoyed it. Stay focused, keep your chin up, girl.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

My eyes followed the clouds- Or was it the SKY--& I saw blue waves of blue

So I hit my head on your counter...looking up at the sky while blogging. U must put up a DANGER sign Tree. (BTW, did I mention you are very quiet, since your many successes**wink wink**). PJ Deonils

posted by Budd-Himoschris on August 9, 2004 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

nice haiku and nice comments, i enjoyed it..

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Hey HolyG

I think a lot of us do it all of the time, especially here on Blogit.    I just wanted to write a haiku about it, another little note to myself.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

That's great!  Sometimes I wish mine would do some crumbling as well.  

posted by Holy_Grail on August 9, 2004 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, David. Since thought forms and patterns have such a strong impact

on our lives, I am definitely hoping.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

Tremacc

Great Haiku!    I am just thinking: when those hard encrusted thought do crumble away; what is left is a beautiful mind!

posted by David1Spirit on August 9, 2004 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

THANKS INHERENT RIGHTS. SAD TO SEE YOU GO, KIDDO.

I WISH YOU THE BEST IN YOUR FUTURE.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

HELLO MIA, YES! IT SEEMS I AM RENEWIING MYSELF EVERYDAY.

A TRANSFORMATION IS OCCURING.   A METAMORPHOSIS OF SORTS.   HOPE ALL IS WELL WITH YOU.   THANKS FOR YOUR FEEDBACK.

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

HELLO MISS SUE............... YOU ARE TOO FUNNY.

 

posted by Tremac on August 9, 2004 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful as always tremacc!

posted by InherentRights on August 9, 2004 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

Barnacles of the mind

washing away with the tide, huh?

posted by MiaElla on August 9, 2004 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

HELLO MISS TREMACCC??????

posted by 9STAR on August 9, 2004 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply