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You've painted a vivid picture
in this poem.

posted by word.smith on July 31, 2004 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

yes...
I am real, and you have made a good change here...

posted by void-is on July 29, 2004 at 3:01 AM | link to this | reply

It's your's...

a woman across from me
smokes with hurt passion

if you want it...take care fellow Canadian...

posted by void-is on July 28, 2004 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

Noir
eroticism...yes, I like...

posted by void-is on July 28, 2004 at 2:16 PM | link to this | reply

Ane--you set the scene. Interesting play. love scriber

posted by scriber on July 28, 2004 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply