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Ouch! Hurts my heart, hurts, hurts, hurts soooo bad
posted by
Kelli
on August 19, 2004 at 7:07 PM
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how sad...
makes me want to cry...very powerful and moving piece.
xxdevon
posted by
-BlueRoses
on August 19, 2004 at 7:03 PM
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Oh so true, benzinha
but I feel that my brother has not really left us. He is just "there" in a different way.
posted by
Friar__Tuck
on July 27, 2004 at 10:04 PM
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friarcito mio, brothers and sisters are such precious people in our lives.
I was remembering today, how mean I used to be to my first little brother. He is the one who gave me a car last month, bought me a computer a few years ago and paid for me to travel to my last highschool reunion with him and his wife. I thank God that we learn to forget cruelties and forgive. I am blessed to have such a good brother.
I am so sorry that your wonderful brother is gone. I liked the way that you travelled through his life with you, in your poem. If we could all only die in the order in which we are born, it might be easier to accept. It is never easy. I am so sorry for your loss, so very sorry.
posted by
benzinha
on July 27, 2004 at 8:50 PM
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