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Thank you for reading Poetic.

posted by Ca88andra on July 4, 2004 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

I love the imagery

I can see and feel the poem in action...

someone is on their way to my faves list...

posted by thepoetBubbaGirl on July 4, 2004 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Eccentric!

posted by Ca88andra on July 1, 2004 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

Very cool Ca88andra.

I love the elements 

posted by EccentricShock on July 1, 2004 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

that wind is taking me aROUND........

posted by onRain on July 1, 2004 at 4:51 PM | link to this | reply

Sub & Tanoo - thanks for reading.

posted by Ca88andra on June 30, 2004 at 3:56 PM | link to this | reply

great poem!  

posted by Tanoolicious on June 30, 2004 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and powerful....Sub

posted by Subpenny1 on June 30, 2004 at 2:22 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you teddy!

posted by Ca88andra on June 30, 2004 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

astounding imagery! felt like March and October in the Midwest!

posted by _teddypoet on June 30, 2004 at 12:22 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Quirky!

posted by Ca88andra on June 29, 2004 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88, I hate wind, but I liked your poem!

posted by Julia. on June 29, 2004 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

i will ca88andra.....

posted by onRain on June 28, 2004 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Sue - good idea, might have to write a poem about that!

posted by Ca88andra on June 28, 2004 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

very nice......did you here what wind said? listen closely.......

posted by onRain on June 28, 2004 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Moondawg - when I lived in northern Victoria I experienced some of the most amazing dust storms. Mother Nature is certainly creative.

posted by Ca88andra on June 28, 2004 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

harvey - its a combination of poetic licence and wanting to have a contrast to the force of the wind

posted by Ca88andra on June 28, 2004 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

Good images

sounds like the winds that come with the thunderstorms here. It starts as a teasing cool breeze with a sent of rain, but contiues to pick up force as the storm gets closer, then finally admist the swirling dust we get two or three drops of rain, then it's over and the cars need washing again.

posted by Moondawg on June 28, 2004 at 8:09 PM | link to this | reply

Cass,

Nice descriptions and some hilarious comparisons.

Are you really not moved by the awsome power of the wind . . . or just exercising poetic license?

posted by HarveyG on June 28, 2004 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reading Mia, Mari and Roofpig...

posted by Ca88andra on June 28, 2004 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

That poor garden...

posted by roofpig on June 28, 2004 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

Chilling!

posted by MariVye on June 28, 2004 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

Ver nice

posted by MiaElla on June 28, 2004 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply