Comments on Melbourne winter mornings

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Thanks harvey - *smile*

posted by Ca88andra on June 14, 2004 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

LOVE IT!!

"globules of wet spit from the clouds" was such a neat surprise.

posted by HarveyG on June 14, 2004 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

thebuxomwench - thanks for the kind words - how I wish I was in Brisbane (or the Caribbean) right now!

posted by Ca88andra on June 14, 2004 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

PS: Regardless, the poem IS a delight in itself :) xx.

posted by Moohahaha on June 14, 2004 at 3:52 PM | link to this | reply

LOL, I think it's the whole memory of how long it took me to recover from
my first Summer in Brisbane (argh, the humidity) that influenced my choice of words :) xx.

posted by Moohahaha on June 14, 2004 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

thebuxomwench - I'm not sure about "delights".... lol

posted by Ca88andra on June 14, 2004 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

You capture the sensory delights of those Melb' mornings perfectly :) xx

posted by Moohahaha on June 14, 2004 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Symphony and MiaElla

posted by Ca88andra on June 14, 2004 at 3:39 PM | link to this | reply

Katray - its winter here and freezing.

posted by Ca88andra on June 14, 2004 at 3:39 PM | link to this | reply

Wintery
Perfect for the rainy dark day here in Florida.

posted by MiaElla on June 14, 2004 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

great poem

posted by _Symphony_ on June 14, 2004 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

Nice imagery.  Reminded me of winter, even though it's hot summertime here.

posted by katray4 on June 14, 2004 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Tanoo!

posted by Ca88andra on June 14, 2004 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

very lovely Ca88andra

posted by Tanoolicious on June 14, 2004 at 4:53 AM | link to this | reply

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