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Vivid use of visual detail here! Dreams offer the perfect world, where we can be horrified or scared or even seduced without any actual danger.
I think the meter works well with this one. It has a playfulness that suits the kaleidoscopic description. ~ faranya
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faranya
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June 5, 2004
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This poem...
puts a movie in my mind. A movie of a dream.
posted by
food4thought
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June 4, 2004
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Thanks katray!
posted by
Ca88andra
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June 4, 2004
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Lol, flying fish and talking cats. Dreams can be so crazy. Wonderful imagery.
posted by
katray4
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June 4, 2004
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Thank you - I had fun thinking of the images - but I do have really weird dreams sometimes!
posted by
Ca88andra
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June 4, 2004
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I also loved the imagery your words provoked.
Clever.
posted by
Original_Influence
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June 4, 2004
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I also loved the imagery your words provoked.
Clever.
posted by
Original_Influence
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June 4, 2004
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I love the vivid imagery and colourful rhythm of this ... wonderful :) xx.
posted by
Moohahaha
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June 3, 2004
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