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Great use of imagery. The closing personification is delightful, too. I've been reading through your poems, enjoying the varied styles.

posted by faranya on June 5, 2004 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply

thanks tremacc and moondawg

posted by Ca88andra on June 2, 2004 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

Really like it

especially the part about natures mischief.

posted by Moondawg on June 2, 2004 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

I love the fluffy layers of this poem and the way that you bring nature to life.

posted by Tremac on June 2, 2004 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

tbgroucho - thanks

posted by Ca88andra on June 2, 2004 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

temple - cass is fine - couldnt get the nickname with the "ss" in it! and thanks for the good wishes, it is real time and I am in bed wishing I was anywhere else

posted by Ca88andra on June 2, 2004 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

thank you Ariala - they say Melbourne has four seasons in one day and today is proving it.

posted by Ca88andra on June 2, 2004 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

lovely lemon imagery

really great.  tg

posted by tbgroucho on June 2, 2004 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

what should I call you for short?

I was going to say Cass, but they are 8's...so...hmmm...I'll say that I really love this line: 

I can almost hear nature giggle at her mischief.  If this is real time and you are sick, feel better. :)

posted by Temple on June 2, 2004 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

Nice imagery...interesting contrast between sweet and sour (the weather)

posted by Ariala on June 2, 2004 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply