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THE DARK SIDE OF SANTA BARBARA-THE WEALTH, THE GREED...
Good stuff poet...
You manage well
to catch
the wealth and beauty
of my hometown
wilst ignoring
or unknowing
the depths
of darkside
depravity
in which I steep
daily
in my chozen profession
I need reminding
of these truths
to avoid despair
for it is truly
beautiful here
thank you
Posted by on March 24, 2004 at 11:40 AM (link)
i POSTED YOUR COMMENTS HERE SO I COULD COMMENT ON THEM.
WELL SAID. ACTUALLY I HAD TO MOVE AWAY BECAUSE OF THE DEPRAVITY OF THE "BEAUTIFUL SANTA YNEZ VALLEY" I DO KNOW FIRSTHAND OF THE DARK SIDE OF THAT PLACE TOO. I CHOOSE TO FOCUS ON THE PHYSICAL BEAUTY BECAUSE THE PAIN IS TOO MUCH.
LOVE YA
POETJPB
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March 24, 2004
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some Santa Barbara poems for you from poetjpb
Can't remember if I already sent these???? Sand in my brain!!!! Duh
POETJPB'S BOOK of POETRY, ONE SHORT POEM A DAY >>> - 1 minute ago
BY POPULAR REQUEST (WELL 2 OF YOU ANYWAY) SANTA BARBARA POEM - SANTA...
Poetry - Popularity rank: 277
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March 24, 2004
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click one--thanks for sending in your poem
ABOUT THE CHALLENGE!!! FROM POETJPB
I CANNOT CHOOSE ONE. I MUST CONFESS, YOUR POEMS ARE MORE WONDERFUL THAN I THOUGHT THEY WOULD BE. I AM SORRY FOR MY LACK OF CONFIDENCE.
Honestly, I have read and re-read them a million times and I love them all sooooooooooo...
I can't bear to hurt anyone or choose one over another. I have learned a lesson, I cannot hold another "contest" for winners. Not my style. So I will give each contestant 5 clicks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope this is okay. And I will comment on each POEM IN A BLOG IN MY A COLUMN ABOUT NOTHING BLOG.
Hey, I live in Ventura County, I love Santa Barbara, have you seen my SB poems???????
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March 24, 2004
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