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posted by
poetjpb
on March 29, 2004 at 8:26 PM
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I do look forward to your comment on my poem. I am my worst critic and this is one thing i love about this website is there are so many people who know poetry and the art and can give solid opinions to help a poet grow. Id love it if you could read some of my work and give me your opinion. thanks.
posted by
tammyjean
on March 29, 2004 at 10:25 AM
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THE STATE OF BEING
Ha! Last night I went to Borders bookstore and this dude (phd) was talking about his book, something about Being!!! I could hardly keep a straight face. What BS!
posted by
poetjpb
on March 25, 2004 at 5:10 PM
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No JP, I can't find it either. It was a bit silly, so maybe you deleted it, thinking it was a glitch. I think I had a title for it, but, like that recent Symphony of Silence, or whatever it was called, mine just had no words and only punctuation, so it wasn't exactly hard to write. It was a bit too Tate Modern. Here's another one to replace it...
The Unbearable Triteness of Being.
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Maybe we could run a silly competition - guess the famous poem from its punctuation.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on March 25, 2004 at 12:50 AM
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Poet, well thank you but would be interesting
to hear exactly what chord! Just teasing!
posted by
write4u
on March 24, 2004 at 9:42 AM
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I REALLY HAVE READ YOURS A LOT
WASN'T YOURS ABOUT A WASTELAND?
I LOVE TS ELLIOT AND THE WASTELAND SO THAT IMAGE STRUCK A CORD
posted by
poetjpb
on March 24, 2004 at 9:37 AM
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Poet, that's ok! You're a sweet person!
But you can use my poem anytime,for instructions on HOW NOT TO DESTROY A POEM! hehehe
posted by
write4u
on March 24, 2004 at 9:35 AM
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