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I remember travellin' and leaving Joyce alone like that, oh you do stroke the mind love, and the soul
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 22, 2004 at 9:00 AM
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thanks katray, i think i will go and read you now
posted by
poetjpb
on March 21, 2004 at 8:27 PM
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Very nice
and flowing. I enjoyed the images.
posted by
Katray2
on March 21, 2004 at 8:24 PM
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and i ended up watching the news like he does
posted by
poetjpb
on March 21, 2004 at 7:09 PM
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--yeah foxy I guess I do
well the meaning--yes its somewhat obscure
Fist I am lonely, missing him, remembering how he watches the news, his slippers, etc.but then I self actualize (ha) and am ok with being with me.
my hubby was gone--business trip--he was talking to a person he works with while I was trying to talk to him-they were going out to dinner --anyway, I ended up being okay with myself and being alone--therefore eating the dove bar alone, turning down dinner out
posted by
poetjpb
on March 21, 2004 at 7:08 PM
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quite an interesting poem, would take me time to soak in the meeting, quite a riddle to me.
posted by
tammyjean
on March 21, 2004 at 8:15 AM
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That poor woman needs to get a life!
posted by
FoxyBlue
on March 21, 2004 at 6:35 AM
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