Sunday, March 25, 2007
XX RATING: Do bloggers Cross lines of decency w/sensual posts & pictures?
Do you think this picture ought to be excluded form so-called poetry posts/blogs? http://farm1.static.flickr.com/160/431868742_07faa0c3c5.jpg?v=0 SONNET #6 Shall I exclude your form and its appeals? Poetry shall suffer in comparison: Diction, rhyme versus what she says, feels... Her shivering grace...
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Saturday, March 24, 2007
Next, passion for passion.Abundantly OR superabundantly..XX SUBJECT & PICS.
TRIPOETRY -instead of haiku which avoids human emotions, this form will do. http://farm1.static.flickr.com/160/431868742_07faa0c3c5.jpg?v=0 PASSION ONE: Just the thought of your generous breasts, arrest my fatigue. I rest. PASSION TWO: My limbs edge wider to reveal a non-spider web for you. We...
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Friday, March 23, 2007
Sharing with kids at school--the dangers of poetry (RHYME SCHEME improved)
SONNET # 5 Shall I share passion for poetry with you? Shall I share passion for poetry with you? Or are you too young, I an old sop? When you charge toward expletives, a few, In collections sold in my china shop Shattering bonds between "them", "us","these"... Not grasping common prayers, touching...
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Thursday, March 22, 2007
haiku and senryu inspired by FIONAJEAN from SOUTH AFRICA
http://www.photographyblog.com/gallery/data/531/999Heron_and_Daffodils.jpg we are poles apart magnets of the south are strong north pole liberates HAIKU: warm day after chill miniature-sun-daffodils open to magic (c) deo 3-22-2007 http://www.rbgkew.org.uk/seasons/images274/04daffodils.jpg
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Wednesday, March 21, 2007
(I am keeping up my personal commitment) SONNET # 4
SHALL I CALL THE WAITING… Shall I call the waiting an aching, now? Waiting for love that smiles a good morning Even before I open my eyes, mind, nose … Someone who completes my thoughts-yet-forming Shall I tell of the mourning doves that come Without fail before the first day of spring? They visit...
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Tuesday, March 20, 2007
Springing forward to Haiku
http://k43.pbase.com/o4/33/20333/1/58476665.robin2.jpg HAIKU I - senryu work that weighs me down yet I walked nine blocks for rest how robins lift me! HAIKU II - NATURE haiku tiny buds push forth daffodils rush to flower hope sends deeper roots (c)deo, 3-20-2007
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Monday, March 19, 2007
SONNET: Shall I compare thee to the Founding Fathers?
WILLIAM PENN, World Statesman The pen fought so well for William Junior Son of privateer-thief of Jamaica Knighted by King Charles, became a lender of gold to Charles; son got Pennsylvania I write of the son not for history Merged in the love of two women for Penn First Gulielma Springett, precious...
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Saturday, March 17, 2007
Sonnet Break--St. Patrick's Day haiku (what would the Zen Buddha say?!!)
haiku I (senryu) someone said green snow Irish sun and ice parades Australia and here! haiku II green snow on the eve of a shamrock holiday natural union http://www.psyfreak.com/photos/partys/sky%20synphonie%20BE%201999/images/snow%20and%20green.jpg
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Friday, March 16, 2007
Sonnet #3: aabb ccdd eeff gg
EASTER SONNET (other suggestions for a title are most welcome) At moments when life oozes from fingers Urges to wield pen, surprise my papers My head hesitates, or is it my heart, Not believing the miracle of art? There are joys in the birth and endeavor After all I have yet to discover That part of...
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Thursday, March 15, 2007
Haiku-Senryu PAIR #2 welcoming the Ides of March 2007
acknowledgement below I - haiku: dawn twitters explode - carving territory now tomorrow's peace eggs II - senryu: I awake to song - chatter, swagger, carving space: balcony for birds (c) deo http://ngishili.com/images/savouring1.jpg
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