Saturday, January 23, 2010
Plot has some major problems. How do you take two people from different environments--neither can live in the other's world and bring them together at least long enough for them to find a solution? True, I don't intend the story to be science fiction, but even in fantasy, magic has something of an... Sign in to see full entry.
Friday, January 15, 2010
Black and White
Black and white. Dark power, course, survivalists. Light, utopia, purity, the good of all. Shadow, the only place the two can survive as one. Nothing clear. No real home. A wasteland to be developed into something, something that will grow. She of light. He of dark. A union of nations. Necessary.... Sign in to see full entry.
Tuesday, January 12, 2010
Bits and Pieces
No thoughts form in entirity. No meaning no purpose but the words are there and they spill forth in a gobbled mess of linear soldiers and curved mass. I need to clear this glob of crap to allow the real words, those that form characters, pictures, places, things. the words that give me purpose,... Sign in to see full entry.