Opening Paragraphs for My First Book ... What do you think?
Today, The hospital emergency room bustled with activity at around 9 p.m. on a school weeknight. My mother and father checked me in to triage. I stood between them, my body feeling weaker and weaker, my eyelids fluttering open and closed. I could hear the faraway sound of an unrecognizable voice... Sign in to see full entry.